I used what I had available to make this surface fishing rig. How does it look?

I have to order any carp specific gear so I'm just using what I have already. This is for a small pole I'm dedicating to stalking/surface fishing- 8lb mono mainline, swivel, anti snag sleeve, 12lb zig line, clear trout bobber, size 8 hook, pop up on hair rig. I chose the white pop up to match the bread I'll be using for now. If this works ill eventually order some carp specific stuff and improve the rig. Looking for something similar to dog buscuits here in the US for next try.